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		<title>Night Owl Romance Reviews &#8220;In the Brief Eternal Silence&#8221;</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 26 Jul 2009 15:21:56 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Melvin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[About two months ago I received an invitation from Night Owl Romance Reviews to submit my work, In the Brief Eternal Silence for review. This requet took me by surprise for two reasons:
1. I didn&#8217;t recall contacting them offering them the book (or, if I had contacted them, it had been so long ago I couldn&#8217;t [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>About two months ago I received an invitation from Night Owl Romance Reviews to submit my work, <em>In the Brief Eternal Silence</em> for review. This requet took me by surprise for two reasons:</p>
<p>1. I didn&#8217;t recall contacting them offering them the book (or, if I had contacted them, it had been so long ago I couldn&#8217;t remember). Suffice it to say it was &#8216;out of the blue&#8217;.</p>
<p>2. Upon visiting their site, I noted that they did indeed review romance books, and many of them, but that they seemed to concentrate on what I will politely term &#8217;spicy&#8217; (one could also substitute the words, &#8216;erotic&#8217;, &#8216;exotic&#8217; and &#8216;explicit&#8217; if you get my drift). Here are a few examples of some of their recently reviewed titles:</p>
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<li><em>Good Will Ghost Hunting: Demon Seed</em> by Lesli Richardson</li>
<li><em>Naughty Fantasies</em> by Jade James</li>
<li><em>My Wicked Vampire</em> by Nina Bangs</li>
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<p>In short, the majority of their titles contain the words paranormal or erotic (if not both) in their genre descriptions. Not exactly the audience that I expected <em>In the Brief Eternal Silence</em> in particular nor Double Edge Press in general to garner.</p>
<p>However, I had been invited to submit, and I&#8217;ve never deemed myself a snob. So off I sent the book to be reviewed. But I do have to confess a certain curiousity as to what the results would be of my submission.</p>
<p>Friday, the results came in. Here is the official Night Owl Romance Reviews review:</p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Review: In the Brief Eternal Silence by Rebecca Melvin (Double Edge Press) Historical</p>
<p><span />The Duke of St. James is on a mission&#8211;to find the culprits who murdered his parents when he was but a boy of 10 years old. Along the way, he finds that the whole matter goes a lot deeper and contains more conspiracy than he could ever imagine&#8211;and might even involve the crown. Falling in love was the very last thing he wanted to do. </p>
<p>Miss Elizabeth Murdock is as plain as the day is long&#8211;and she likes it that way. She doesn&#8217;t like attention and prefers to blend into the background. Then the Duke of St. James comes into her life and turns it upside down.</p>
<p>Love creeps up on both of them&#8211;but vengeance has to be dealt with first, as now it is not only the life of the Duke that is in danger, but Miss Murdock’s as well.</p>
<p>How can the Duke end his vengeance and get the murderers before anyone else gets killed? Or will the murderers succeed before he and Miss Murdock can find true love? Have to read to find out.</p>
<p>This book took me by surprise. It started out kind of slow but once it picked up I was definitely hooked. This wasn&#8217;t the type of book I usually like to read but I have to say I enjoyed it immensely. This kept me reading to the end&#8211;and it was a very satisfying ending at that.</p>
<p>Happy reading,<br />
<span />The Night Owl Romance Staff<br />
<span />Night Owl Romance<br />
Stay Up Late With A Great Novel<br />
<a href="http://www.nightowlromance.com/">http://www.NightOwlRomance.com</a></p></blockquote>
<p>For a review, I&#8217;ll take that one. Considering it&#8217;s competition, I&#8217;m not complaining in the least.</p>
<p>Everyone have a great Sunday.</p>
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		<title>Nice Review for &#8220;An Unlikely Missionary&#8221;</title>
		<link>http://hummingbirdworldmedia.com/blog/2009/06/16/nice-review-for-an-unlikely-missionary/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Jun 2009 14:06:44 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Melvin</dc:creator>
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A wonderful premise that captures the Austen era. Ms. Burris has a beautiful voice. I felt she nailed Charlotte&#8217;s persona. It was a bit of a struggle for me [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t often blog about customer reviews our works receive, but occasionally one will catch my eye, like this one for Skylar Hamilton Burris&#8217; <em>An Unlikely Missionary</em>:</p>
<blockquote><p>A wonderful premise that captures the Austen era. Ms. Burris has a beautiful voice. I felt she nailed Charlotte&#8217;s persona. It was a bit of a struggle for me to get through the heavy number of characters and lull as the storyline traveled by sea&#8211;but once there, the beauty of the plot and setting was enthralling. I am so happy Charlotte got her Happily Ever After. Poor Mr. Collins was handled with humor and taste. A very elegant story. A very elegant heroine. A very elegant author. I am now a fan of your work &#038; will be looking out for more. Well done!</p>
<p>Danielle Thorne<br />
Author of The Privateer</p>
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<p>Thank You, Danielle.</p>
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		<title>Review: &#8220;The Rules of Attraction&#8221; by Mark Deo</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 10 May 2009 13:35:45 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Melvin</dc:creator>
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Review Date: 05/09/09 
Rating: 
Rules of Attraction: Fourteen Practical Rules to Help Get the Right Clients, Talent and Resources to Come to You by Mark Deo
Market Analysis:
Amazon sale price: $12.21. List Price: $17.95.
If this were a paperback printed on demand: cost per page: $0.013 x 228 pages = $2.96 to print + .90 per cover = Total print [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em><a href="http://www.amazon.com/Rules-Attraction-Fourteen-Practical-Resources/dp/1600375642/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&#038;s=books&#038;qid=1241959349&#038;sr=1-1" target="_blank"><img title="Mark Deo Rules of Attraction" alt="Mark Deo Rules of Attraction" src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51UlCop8GIL._SL500_AA240_.jpg" align="left" /></a></em></p>
<p>Review Date: 05/09/09 </p>
<p>Rating: <img src="http://hummingbirdworldmedia.com/images/stars-5.gif" /></p>
<p><em>Rules of Attraction: Fourteen Practical Rules to Help Get the Right Clients, Talent and Resources to Come to You </em>by Mark Deo</p>
<p>Market Analysis:</p>
<p align="left"><em>Amazon sale price: $12.21. List Price: $17.95.</em></p>
<p align="left"><em>If this were a paperback printed on demand: cost per page: $0.013 x 228 pages = $2.96 to print + .90 per cover = Total print cost of $3.86. The List price is $17.95 &#8211; 55% wholesale discount = $8.08 &#8211; total print cost of 3.86 = $4.22 gross profit margin per book for the publisher. Amazon, on the other hand, is making a tidy $9.87.</em></p>
<p align="left"><em>Book ranking as of today: 227,587. Approximate Amazon Sales between 10 to 30 books a month if this remains consistent in that ranking area. So the publisher net income is between $42.20 and $126.80 a month through Amazon. This of course would not include books sold through other outlets. As this book is newly released just as of this past week, this ranking is likely to fluctuate a great deal.</em></p>
<p align="left">Review:</p>
<p align="left">Addressing the Intangibles</p>
<p align="left">Mark Deo&#8217;s work is a refreshing and thought-provoking read, especially for someone who has read their share of &#8216;business&#8217; books. Business books in general seem to reside in one of two categories, those that are just vague enough to be useless, and those that go after their subject and the area of the author&#8217;s expertise with razor sharp clarity, which are a great deal useful <em>in that one area.</em></p>
<p align="left"><em>The Rules of Attraction </em>confounds the two categories cited above. It is neither vague nor pointed, but embarks on a journey that does indeed highlight the author&#8217;s area of expertise: business philosophy and the value of intangibles. As I said, it is not vague. Mark Deo writes clear and compelling prose that delves into the 14 Rules cited in his title. Many go contrary to long-held &#8216;rules&#8217; that every business has automatically operated by for decades, including such shockers as rejecting business, advertising sucks, and suicide by marketing<em>.</em></p>
<p align="left">In addition to radical thinking when it comes to the intangibles of business, he also offers some radical thinking when it comes to the tangibles: how many books have you read that actually recommend deciding on your color and design before your message? But Deo makes a convincing argument for the importance of garnering attention first through color and design, so that the message, whatever you ultimately decide it to be, will actually be read. His numerous case studies with before and after ads are worth the cost of the book in and of themselves. I can guarantee that after reading this work, you will never again write up the text of an ad and then squeeze a few images in wherever they may fit.</p>
<p align="left">Ultimately the true value of this book lies in not giving you direction on the small details of your business, but in evaluating your business in the large-picture sense and in a no-nonsense, realistic manner. Gone are the days where a company labored over a &#8216;mission statement&#8217; that was quickly forgotten in less than a month even by those assigned to write it. Deo introduces a new day of tapping into true passions, true visions and winning heartshare over marketshare.</p>
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		<title>Review: Content Rich &#8211; Writing Your Way to Wealth on the Web by Jon Wuebben</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Apr 2009 15:47:53 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Melvin</dc:creator>
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Reveiw Date: 04/13/2009
Rating: 
Content Rich &#8211; Writing Your Way to Wealth on the Web by Jon Wuebben, published by Encore Publishing Group (independent publisher), 270 pages (hardback edition)
Market Analysis:
Amazon sale price: $15.56. List Price: $19.95.
If this were a paperback printed on demand: cost per page: $0.013 = $3.51 to print + .90 per cover = Total print [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a title="Content Rich - Writing Your Way to Wealth on the Web" href="http://www.amazon.com/Content-Rich-Writing-Your-Wealth/dp/0979762901/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&#038;s=books&#038;qid=1239634561&#038;sr=1-1" target="_blank"><img title="Content Rich - Writing Your Way to Wealth on the Web" alt="Content Rich - Writing Your Way to Wealth on the Web" src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/31HU5KaY1PL._BO2,204,203,200_PIsitb-sticker-arrow-click,TopRight,35,-76_AA198_SH20_OU01_.jpg" align="left" /></a></p>
<p>Reveiw Date: 04/13/2009</p>
<p>Rating: <img title="5 Stars" alt="5 Stars" src="http://hummingbirdworldmedia.com/images/stars-5.gif" /></p>
<p>Content Rich &#8211; <em>Writing Your Way to Wealth on the Web</em> by Jon Wuebben, published by Encore Publishing Group (independent publisher), 270 pages (hardback edition)</p>
<p>Market Analysis:</p>
<p align="left"><em>Amazon sale price: $15.56. List Price: $19.95.</em></p>
<p align="left"><em>If this were a paperback printed on demand: cost per page: $0.013 = $3.51 to print + .90 per cover = Total print cost of $4.41. The List price is $19.95 &#8211; 55% wholesale discount = $8.98 &#8211; total print cost of 4.41 = $4.57 profit margin per book.</em></p>
<p align="left"><em>Book ranking as of today: 30,832. Approximate Amazon Sales between 50 to 70 books a month if this remains consistent in that ranking area. So the publisher net income is between $228.50 and $319.90 a month through Amazon. This of course would not include books sold through other outlets.</em></p>
<p align="left">Review:</p>
<p align="left">Jon Wuebben&#8217;s Content Rich &#8211; Writing Your Way to Wealth on the Web is a small jewel in the world of self-help/how-to books on how to go about setting up a web-site that is found by searchers and utilized. It&#8217;s primary focus is on copywriting as an industry, but his advice is invaluable for anyone who is setting up a commercial web-site and is doing their own copywriting (writing the text for each page).</p>
<p align="left">Where other books I have read cover a large gambit of web marketing in its entirety, Jon Wuebben covers what he knows best with laser sharp clarity. And as SEO (search engine optimization) is a primary, basic and absolute crucial element to any web site business, I can not stress how primary, basic and absolutely crucial it is to read a book that presents a comprehensive guide on how to go about it. The surprise is that it is neither hard nor particularly time consuming. SEO may be the best kept secret in the entire web industry, not due to how complicated it is, but due to how prevalent the misconception is that it is complicated.</p>
<p align="left">Jon Wuebben brushes away all the mystery surrounding SEO and lists the steps to take, the reasons behind them, and the results you can well expect. He adds other elements that are both useful and fascinating, from Press Release Writing, Blogging and even Twittering, but this is all mere bonus material as one gets more than the worth of the book in the SEO aspect alone.</p>
<p align="left">A must have for those serious about e-commerce.</p>
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		<title>Waaay Off the Beaten Path &#8212; a Rewarding Detour</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Apr 2009 14:15:59 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Melvin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Over the weekend, one of my kid&#8217;s friends was over. This particular friend is over nearly every weekend, to the point where we don&#8217;t even notice him anymore. He blends in, and a look around the dinner table without his extra face on the weekend would give me the feeling that something was missing.
This weekend, [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Over the weekend, one of my kid&#8217;s friends was over. This particular friend is over nearly every weekend, to the point where we don&#8217;t even notice him anymore. He blends in, and a look around the dinner table without his extra face on the weekend would give me the feeling that something was missing.</p>
<p>This weekend, he brought a book, which I found on the coffee table. It was a big, huge hardback with over 400 pages, a bright, shiny cover, and I was instantly intrigued. &#8220;Who&#8217;s book is this?&#8221; I asked whichever kid happened to be wandering by and thinking that my husband had brought in some new reading material. When I received the answer that it was our visitor&#8217;s book, I was both surprised and impressed. I didn&#8217;t know he was a reader, and with his only being in ninth grade and tackling this sizable hardback, I didn&#8217;t know that he was a reader of immense proportions. My opinion of him, which was already good, went up. Perhaps we could officially adopt him instead of merely having him hang about a good deal of the time.</p>
<p>I picked up the book and found that it was this title: <img title="A Lion's Tale: Around the World in Spandes -- Chris Jericho" alt="A Lion's Tale: Around the World in Spandes -- Chris Jericho" src="http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/51hMivxOyHL._BO2,204,203,200_PIsitb-sticker-arrow-click,TopRight,35,-76_AA240_SH20_OU01_.jpg" align="left" /></p>
<p><em>Review date: 04/05/09</em></p>
<p><em>Rating: </em> <img src="http://g-ec2.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/x-locale/common/customer-reviews/stars-5-0._V47081849_.gif" /></p>
<p><em> </em><em>A Lion&#8217;s Tale: Around the World in Spandex</em> by Chris Jericho is not my normal reading. I don&#8217;t follow wrestling (although I do recall watching the matches of Andre the Giant, Chief Strongbow and ilk when I was a kid. I had three older brothers, you must remember, and there were only three channels on the television). But with a title containing the words, around the world in spandex, how could I resist?</p>
<p>I picked up the book to get an idea of whether it was any good and I was hooked. My weekend was shot. I started the book Saturday afternoon, and, after refusing to take our guest home until I had finished it, I closed the cover Sunday evening at 5:30. &#8220;Okay, Dallas. I&#8217;m done. I can take you home now.&#8221; I think he was relieved I was a fast reader. Visions of being held hostage for three or four days must have begun dancing in his head. Either that, or leaving me the book and facing the wrath of his older brother who had already claimed rights to reading it next.</p>
<p>No, I&#8217;m not a wrestling fan, but I am a fan of a good autobiography with a clear voice, and Chris Jericho tells a good and compelling tale, totally unabashed in allowing the reader in on every humiliating mistake of his, and others&#8217;, careers. I quickly learned that our suspiciions as kids watching Chief Strongbow and Andre the Giant that the matches were rigged and the wrestling staged were true. After reading Chris&#8217; work I can assure all wide-eyed wrestling fans that not only do they pull their punches, but they know going in who&#8217;s going to win, even the (gasp) title bouts. A good wrestler is one who loses when told to lose, and manages to make the other guy look good while doing so.</p>
<p>Chris has no qualms in revealing that and every other &#8217;secret&#8217; of the wrestling world, and I finished the book with a new appreciation of the industry: it&#8217;s the last vaudeville show on earth, complete with desperate, starving performers and a motley crew of characters that would put any circus to shame. The stunts, the &#8216;ribs&#8217; (practical jokes) and the sometimes depravity described gives an insider view of one very bizarre, yet very tight-knit, world.</p>
<p>What won double kudos from me is that Chris, in his &#8216;let it all hang out&#8217; style of story-telling also addressed his Christian roots, his Christian faith, and had absolutely no problem head-lining Jesus Christ under his acknowledgments.</p>
<p>I can&#8217;t recommend this as your typical Christian read, but for those of you who don&#8217;t mind some bad language and allusions to some pretty sick behavior by some characters, this is a rollicking good story.</p>
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		<title>New Review Pending</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Mar 2009 16:15:36 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Melvin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[In addition to working on Jim Spurr&#8217;s upcoming Reflections in the Wake, anticipating Martha being featured in a prominent newspaper, working up a proposal for Choice Books, switching out the discounts to wholesalers and retailers in general, and the on-going real estate classes (which I consider as my &#8216;extra-curricular&#8217; activity), there&#8217;s another little on-going project [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In addition to working on Jim Spurr&#8217;s upcoming <em>Reflections in the Wake</em>, anticipating Martha being featured in a prominent newspaper, working up a proposal for Choice Books, switching out the discounts to wholesalers and retailers in general, and the on-going real estate classes (which I consider as my &#8216;extra-curricular&#8217; activity), there&#8217;s another little on-going project that I am enjoying very much: reading and writing up a review for a new book.</p>
<p>One of the little perks of being a publisher/author/blogger, I am finding, is being contacted on occassion by other authors to take a look at their work. This phenomenon first began with <a href="http://hummingbirdworldmedia.com/blog/2008/01/11/souls-of-steel-book-review/" target="_blank"><em>Souls of Steel </em>by Philip Garrow</a> (submitted not by the author, but by a friend of the author), which should in itself be a cautionary tale that although asked to review and receiving a free copy to do so is not going to sway me on my opinion. It continued with a contact from <a href="http://hummingbirdworldmedia.com/blog/2007/10/03/review-word-of-mouth-marketing-andy-sernovitz/" target="_blank">Andy Sernovitz</a> requesting that I read his upcoming book after discovering my review of his first (and although I took him up on this offer, I have as yet to receive the book. Perhaps he took the cautionary tale of Souls of Steel to heart).</p>
<p>The latest request has come from Jon Wuebben, President and CEO of both <a href="http://www.telegentmedia.com/TM/HOME.html" target="_blank">Telegent Media, LLC</a> and <a href="http://www.customcopywriting.com/" target="_blank">Custom Copywriting</a> for his book <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Content-Rich-Writing-Your-Wealth/dp/0979762901/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&#038;s=books&#038;qid=1238342225&#038;sr=1-1" target="_blank"><em>Content Rich: Writing Your Way to Wealth on the Web.</em></a> As his book appears to be selling well without my review, I was flattered to be contacted with the offer.</p>
<p>The book arrived yesterday (with a nice autograph in it, as I always ask for one in these situations. After all, if nothing else at the end of the day, I should have a nice collection of original autographed titles in my library to impress my grandchildren with &#8212; see, kiddies, I once tried to create a family empire for all of you, but, alas, it wasn&#8217;t to be. I do however have these nice autographed books! At which point, my grandchildren still to be born at some point in the future will say, &#8220;What&#8217;s a book?&#8221;) and I began reading last night. So far my notes include the words, undeniable enthusiasm, excitement and fun. Although I only read through the introduction and the first chapter, I already have the distinct impression that Mr. Wuebben is utterly sincere. He has found a way to make a profit on what he is passionate about and has no qualms in sharing his knowledge. A rarity, I have found, when it comes to business &#8216;how-to&#8217; books, the main objective seemingly to be how to give enough information to entice sales without actually creating competition in the field that one is knowledgable in. I know my first thought upon picking up a &#8216;how-to&#8217; is: if the author&#8217;s making so much money doing what they are doing, why do they need to write a book and sell how to do it?</p>
<p>The exception, I&#8217;m thinking, may be when it comes to the very field I am in: writing. Writers like to write, and invariably they like to write to the point that they get around to writing about writing, and if that includes how to make money from writing, that will be written about also. Witness my own blog. There is absolutely no earthly reason for me to blog about my failures and successes other than like a person who talks too much and doesn&#8217;t know when to shut up, I write too much and don&#8217;t know when to take my hands off the keyboard. Diahrea of the fingers, if you will.</p>
<p>But, in regards to Mr. Wuebben&#8217;s work, I&#8217;m enjoying it very much, and if the practical advice he offers matches his enthusiasm in presenting it, I&#8217;m anticipating a great read. And a far from dry one.</p>
<p>Everyone have a great day!</p>
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		<title>New Review for &#8220;An Unlikely Missionary&#8221; by Skylar Hamilton Burris</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Mar 2009 15:37:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Melvin</dc:creator>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A new review was posted this morning on the Long and Short Romance Reviews site for Skylar Hamilton Burris&#8217; <em>An Unlikely Missionary</em>. It received 4.5 books (their equivalent to stars).</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s the link: <a href="http://longandshortreviews.blogspot.com/2009/03/unlikely-missionary-by-skylar-hamilton.html">http://longandshortreviews.blogspot.com/2009/03/unlikely-missionary-by-skylar-hamilton.html</a></p>
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		<title>&#8220;The Long and Short of it Romance Reviews&#8221; Review</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Jan 2009 15:00:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Melvin</dc:creator>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks to Gail MacMillan&#8217;s head&#8217;s up, I submitted one of our titles (mine) to &#8220;The Long and Short of it Romance Reviews&#8221;.</p>
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<p align="left"> Well, the review is in. There&#8217;s something a little disconcerting about starting to read a review of your book and having the first word be &#8220;Terrible&#8221;. . . lol. But for the complete review, read below: </p>
<blockquote><p><strong>Terrible, intriguing, entwined events from years past rule Duke Dante St. James. He walks with the dead as he mingles with meanest of society while seeking VENGEANCE.</strong><strong> </strong><strong /><strong /><strong /><strong /><strong /><strong /><strong></p>
<p align="left">Sara Elizabeth (Lizzie) Murdock, the daughter of a dysfunctional widowed squire, finds herself a pawn in the deadly game St. James plays to lure his enemies into the open. While “her serenity washes over him [St. James] like a healing balm…,” she also disrupts his life mightily.</p>
<p align="left"><em>In the Brief, Eternal Silence</em> is a spellbinding story full of manipulation and covert activities that affect the lives of many as St. James’ twenty-three search come to fruition.</p>
<p align="left">The secondary characters, so vital to the plot, are well developed and come alive with Mrs. Melvin’s superb style of writing. From the ragtag messenger boy Steven, to the incomparable grandmother, these characters illicit an emotional response from the reader in diverse ways as they play their parts in this grand drama of vengeance.</p>
<p align="left"><em>In the Brief, Eternal Silence</em> is excellent reading as the reader sees St. James come to realization that justice encompasses doing the right thing for everyone involved, not just a means by which to assuage one’s own grief. As the plot unfolds, he finds he no longer needs Lizzie to reach his original goal, but “he wants her infinitely”.</p>
<p align="left">This is a happy-ever-after story to be read and enjoyed more than once – a good one for the library shelf.</p>
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<p align="left">That&#8217;s a review I can live with. Next up, Skylar Burris&#8217; work to be submitted.</p>
<p align="left">Everyone have a good weekend!</p>
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		<title>Book Review: The Shack by William P. Young</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Dec 2008 15:19:21 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Melvin</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Book Review: The Shack by William P. Young &#8212; Rating 1 Star
First, I&#8217;m not going to do a Market Analysis as I normally do when doing a book review because the book has been on the best-seller list for some time and I think it suffices to say that the publisher (in this case, Wind [...]]]></description>
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<p>First, I&#8217;m not going to do a Market Analysis as I normally do when doing a book review because the book has been on the best-seller list for some time and I think it suffices to say that the publisher (in this case, Wind Blown Media &#8212; a start up by the author) is making oodles.</p>
<p>Second, I think it needs to be said, and often, that this book is FICTION. According to the author&#8217;s own web-site blog, he began this work as a story for his kids, and he felt that the &#8216;ghost-writing&#8217; slant was a clever little trick (paraphrasing here) that would entertain his children. Even he admits that he never expected the amount of problems that this &#8216;ghost-writing&#8217; angle has brought on, including people that want to buy plane tickets to fly to Oregon and meet Mackenzie Philips (the main character).</p>
<p>I want to break this review into two parts: the first part being a somewhat standard review that I would apply to any book, including writing style, voice, story, etc.</p>
<p>The second part, I want to deal more specifically with the message of the book, something I don&#8217;t normally do, but as this is a wildly popular Christian read, and I am a Christian Publisher, I think the message can not and should not be ignored.</p>
<p><strong>Review: Part I</strong></p>
<p><em>The Shack </em>meets its original intention of being a little book meant for family members and friends. It&#8217;s written from an extremely personal point of view and addresses the accidental (but not murder) death of the author&#8217;s niece at the age of five by creating a story of a little girls murder and the father&#8217;s grief. As a book for the general public, it has an easy to read feel to it, a warm, engaging voice that welcomes the general public into a ever growing circle of friends. I think this intimacy has much to do with its popularity.</p>
<p>From a strictly writing point of view, there were some problems with it, although none major. Probably the largest of these issues was the lack of complete believability of Mack&#8217;s, the main character, grief over his daughter&#8217;s murder. We&#8217;re <em>told</em> he was grieving, we <em>believe</em> he was grieving (what father wouldn&#8217;t), but we never are <em>shown</em> that he is grieving. We&#8217;re asked to take the author&#8217;s word for it, and we do. However, I think it would have been more convincing, when meeting the other characters of the book, the author representation of the Trinity in the form of a black woman, a carpenter and something aking to a wood-sprite, if Mack asked after his daughter. Instead, we&#8217;re treated to a long, cranium-distending discourse on the true nature of God, his plan for human-kind, and a host of other nearly impersonal theocracy. Maybe God would not choose to reveal information on Mack&#8217;s daughter immediately, but I can&#8217;t imagine a grief-stricken father not asking immediately.</p>
<p>So, as a reader, I get the overall sense that the author put his character into a situation that he was not willing to truly write him through and out the other side. He would have been well-served to dish up a little less melodrama at the beginning of the story (melodrama –noun 1. a dramatic form that does not observe the laws of cause and effect and that exaggerates emotion and emphasizes plot at the <strong>expense of</strong> characterization. &#8212; emphasis mine.) and instead build his story the old fashioned way, through characters, actions and dialogue.</p>
<p>The characters in the story all looked alike. They sounded alike, they acted alike. Well, this should be natural, you  may be thinking, because three of these characters are representing the Trinity. So shouldn&#8217;t they be alike? But we&#8217;re dealing with a work of fiction. If a writer chooses to have God in his work as one of his characters, that is fine, but why go to the trouble of introducing the entire Trinity of God if you have no other intention of varying the characters than by appearance? I think the book would have been more effective in characterization if the author had the protagonist dealing with one God character and leave out all the complications of trying to have one character in three different people.</p>
<p>If the author had reduced his God character down to one, however, much of his story would have simply dissipated into nothing. Fully eigthy percent of the story relies on the &#8216;visuals&#8217; the author supplies as his protagonist moves from one God character to another in his journey. Paragraphs are spent on the lush, eden like garden the shack occupies, on the sensations of walking on water or penetrating a cliff behind a water fall. Do away with the constant traipsing between Father, Son and Holy Ghost, all in human forms, and the writer would be left with nothing but about ten pages of a very fluffy college level essay titled &#8220;Conversations with God&#8221; (a title that the author says he first intended only to find that it had already been used for another popular book).</p>
<p>My end analysis from a writing stance is that this is an okay book on the terms that it was orignally written: an imaginative look at what a conversation with God may look like from the author&#8217;s point of view.</p>
<p><strong>Review: Part II</strong></p>
<p>Before I go further, I just want to mention that I am trying to not be harsh. As a Christian Publisher, I&#8217;m leery of throwing stones at other Christian works. I did far more research on this book than on others I have reviewed in order to try to get a handle on what exactly the author&#8217;s intention was in writing it, and what his response has been to its best-selling popularity. His intentions, from what I can gather, were not ominous nor blashpemous. He does seem to admittedly have an axe to grind with what he terms the instutional church (In an interview with <em><a class="mw-redirect" title="World Magazine" href="http://hummingbirdworldmedia.com/wiki/World_Magazine"><font color="#002bb8">World Magazine</font></a>&#8216;</em>s <a title="Susan Olasky" href="http://hummingbirdworldmedia.com/wiki/Susan_Olasky"><font color="#002bb8">Susan Olasky</font></a>, Young, who is no longer a member of a church, said <em>&#8220;(The institutional church) doesn&#8217;t work for those of us who are hurt and those of us who are damaged. . . . If God is a loving God and there&#8217;s grace in this world and it doesn&#8217;t work for those of us who didn&#8217;t get dealt a very good hand in the deck, then why are we doing this? . . . Legalism within Christian or religious circles doesn&#8217;t work very well for people who are good at it. And I wasn&#8217;t very good at it.&#8221;</em><sup class="reference" id="cite_ref-2"><a href="#cite_note-2"><font color="#002bb8">[3]</font></a> &#8211; source: Wikipedia). How he has handled its popularity, however, is questionable.</sup></p>
<p>Before I give you my conclusions, I want to present some definitions of terms that I will be using, just so we are all really clear on what I am discussing.</p>
<p>Truth: 8. <em>(often initial capital letter) </em>ideal or fundamental reality apart from and <strong>transcending perceived experience:</strong> <em>the basic truths of life. (emphasis mine).</em></p>
<p>dogma: 4. a settled, established opinion, belief or principle.</p>
<p>experience: 1. a particular instance of personally enountering or undergoing something.</p>
<p>Okay, with those definitions in mind, let me explain (or try to) what fundamenally concerned me about this book and its portrayal of the Holy Trinity. First was the author manipulation and contrivance through melodrama. The author intentionally gives his words &#8216;weight&#8217; by insinuating that a). the book is true (it isn&#8217;t. The characters are made up and the situation, although heart-breakingly similar to real life occurrences, is made up: hence the book being FICTION), and b). using an emotionally charged situation of having a little girl murdered. If you take either or both of these elements away from the book, you are left with words that carry less weight in the reader&#8217;s mind (and heart). If the author truly has something profound to present, why would he need to manipulate and contrive?</p>
<p>Second, God is not the author of confusion.</p>
<p>In writing this book, William P. Young authored confusion, a confusion that even he, himself, is unwilling or unable to clarify. On the subject ot the books &#8216;truth&#8217; he offers this (from his website): &#8220;So… is all this real?  Is all this true?  I suppose each of us has to decide for ourselves, don’t we?&#8221;</p>
<p>Being someone who has, myself, had some very strong experiences with God, I am not one who immediately falls into the camp of &#8216;you can&#8217;t rely on experience. Period&#8217;. I think that God is alive in our lives and that He does give us experiences. I also believe that for these experiences to be true and not just perceived, that they must be compared to the Word of God and line up consistently with how God has revealed himself in the pages of the Bible. In other words, are they consistent with the Character of God that God Himself has revealed?</p>
<p>That being said, after reading <em>The Shack,</em> but before doing any research, I felt that the author must be operating from, at the very least, a perceived experience. That he must have had some tragedy in his life, went through the grieving process and had stumbled across this scenario as a means of coping. And who am I to tell him that his experience, even if perceived, were not real? I doubted that it was more than perceived, in other words, I doubted that what had occurred was an actuality, but there again, I feel hot in a room, my husband feels cold, and who of us is perceiving the truth of the temperature? The author&#8217;s experience did not fit with any of my experiences, but more importantly, it did not fit with the Truth of the Bible. It did not align itself with the Revelation of God through His Written Word.  It didn&#8217;t even merely expand upon the Revelation of God, but fundamentally <em>changed</em> the character of God revealed.</p>
<p>Upon researching the author, I found that he was not even writing from a perceived experience, but had unequivacally fabricated the all of it. He took the circumstance of his niece&#8217;s death, added himself as a character in the form of Mackenzie Philips, threw his children and wife in as the other characters, and used this as a launching point to spin out his folksy view of how he envisioned God, the Holy Ghost and Jesus Christ. In other words he remade God and the Trinity to suit himself with little regard to the Truth of the Bible or its central message of Jesus Christ being the Way, the Truth and the Light.</p>
<p>Salvation by Jesus Christ goes from being THE TENET of Christianity to this lukewarm exchange in the book (taken from page 182):</p>
<blockquote><p>(Jesus says), &#8220;Those who love me come from every system that exists. They are Buddhists or Mormons, Baptists or Muslims, Democrats, Republicans and many who don&#8217;t vote or are not part of any Sunday morning or religious institutions. . . I have no desire to make them Christian. . .&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;Does that mean,&#8221; Mack asked, &#8220;that all roads will lead to you?&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;Not at all,&#8221; smiled Jesus. &#8220;Most roads don&#8217;t lead anywhere.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p><em>Most </em>roads don&#8217;t lead anywhere? But notice the author doesn&#8217;t unequivacally say that only One Road leads to Salvation?</p>
<p>Let&#8217;s throw another definition in here:</p>
<p>Christian: -noun 7. a person who believes in Jesus Christ; adherent of Christianity</p>
<p>Now look at the above passage from the book, specifically, &#8220;. . .I have no desire to make them Christian. . .&#8221;</p>
<p>So Jesus is telling us that he has no desire to have people believe in Him?</p>
<p>This is the kind of mealy-mouthed, maybe He is, maybe He isn&#8217;t the Saviour and the only way to God found throughout the entire book. It is a nice, comfortable, popular read simply because it has no absolutes.</p>
<p>Well, here&#8217;s an absolute: I absolutely do not recommend reading this book. Rating <img src="http://g-ecx.images-amazon.com/images/G/01/x-locale/common/customer-reviews/stars-1-0._V47060502_.gif" />1 star.</p>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Over the past couple of days I have been reading &#8216;The Shack&#8221; by William P. Young. This is a book I have avoided reading since buying it in July. Why? Because after my purchasing it but before reading it, I was informed that the author portrayed God as a human being in a woman&#8217;s form. That was enough to set alarm bells going off in my head, and any hope of enlightenment I hoped to find in it was extinguished to the point that I had every intention of taking it back for a refund unread. My thinking, in case you are wondering, is &#8220;We already crucified God on the Cross in the form of Jesus Christ, must we now castrate Him also?&#8221; Not to mention all the biblically based arguments I could present of why God the Father does NOT condescend to appear in human form, male or female, in order to communicate with us. He purposely revealed Jesus Christ as His human character, and that is the only way that God became human. It was so OUT of character for him to be human, one might say, that he purposely created a NEW character specifically for the role of being human and God simultaneously: Jesus Christ.</p>
<p>That being said, I will, of course be giving a review upon my completion of reading it. In many ways I hate to even blog about it, because I hate giving it more advertising, even in a negative way.</p>
<p>But, to pick up the tale of the unread book now being read: I gathered up the receipt, stuck it in the pages of the book, and then, in typical Rebecca Melvin fashion, promptly forgot about it. Until about Wednesday of this week. On Wednesday of this week, a family member told me there was a wonderful book I needed to read, about a man whose daughter is brutally murdered and his encounter with God in the midst of his grief. The Shack.</p>
<p>&#8220;Uh-Oh,&#8221; I thought. But there was nothing for it. I would have to read it now, especially since this family member, upon hearing that I actually had the book, wanted my opinion on it. I couldn&#8217;t give a real opinion without reading it, and with as open a mind as possible. So I set out to read it.</p>
<p>As I mentioned, I&#8217;m about half way through. The &#8220;uh-oh&#8221; has turned into a full-force, &#8220;Oh, dear! This is not good.&#8221; But we&#8217;ll leave all of that for the review. What I really wanted to present you with today is something that I ran across while doing a little research on the title yesterday: the most hilarious review of ANY book I have ever read. If you&#8217;re drinking coffee or soda or any other beverage, you may wish to put it down, as it is likely to come squirting out your nose at particular portions of the following.</p>
<p>So here it is, folks, a review of &#8220;The Shack&#8221; by Ben Stevens of Chicago, IL (original review can be seen on Amazon):</p>
<p><strong>As an atheist, I just want to say&#8230;wow. Is that the best you&#8217;ve got?</strong><strong> </strong><strong>The blurb on the cover says &#8220;THE SHACK will leave you craving for the presence of God.&#8221; Genuinely curious, and with an open mind, I started reading.</p>
<p>So you get four chapters of folksy family fun, culminating in what appears to be a shocking murder &#8212; these scenes are rendered well enough, and I (the father of a young girl myself) felt the protagonist&#8217;s anguish well enough to keep reading.</p>
<p>Then, abruptly and with a deafening grinding of gears, the book veers off into the weeds, where it remains firmly wedged for the balance of its page-count. Ponderous and inpenetrable, jargon-heavy and utterly lacking in anything resembling a narrative, it&#8217;s sort of like a cross between a Thomas Kinkade painting and the second &#038; third Matrix movies &#8212; winsome and twee, but utterly tangled up in the minutiae of its own mythology, blundering blindly forward with its shoelaces tied together, firing platitudes and cod-philosophy around in the vain hopes that some of it might hit home. Whole pages, whole chapters go by, with the author staggering around in a kind of fog of theology, apparently trying to resolve age-old questions but instead writing things like &#8220;Guess that&#8217;s jes&#8217; the way I is&#8221; and &#8220;Don&#8217;t confuse adaptation for intention, or seduction for reality.&#8221;</p>
<p>And so it wears on, chapter after chapter of clunky dialogue about ill-defined concepts which are picked up and dropped like the toys of a hyperactive child, apparently seeking to clarify but succeeding only in obscuring all meaning in a lavender cloud of unicorn farts. By about chapter 6 or 7, the Missy plot seems like a distant memory, and the reader&#8217;s only concern is to get out of this book alive.</p>
<p>As a novel, then, this is a laughable effort, but I know it is not primarily intended to be a novel &#8212; it is intended to be a recruiting tool, aimed at winning non-believers over into the theist camp with a sort of warm-n-cozy new-agey version of Christianity, in which the Holy Trinity are a kind of nonthreatening multicultural sitcom family, a trio of irascible kooks with hearts of gold, etc. etc. There may, I suppose, be some hypothetical atheists who are so close to rock bottom that they glimpse some sort of salvation or meaning in this book. But seriously, I doubt there could be more than a few dozen.</p>
<p>So go ahead and feel free to give this book to a &#8216;lost&#8217;/&#8217;seeking&#8217;/'fallen&#8217; friend or family member. Make them part of your secret &#8216;Missy Project&#8217; (as touted on Young&#8217;s website), earn a few more bucks for the author and rack up some points with the man (sorry, woman, er, no, I mean women, or do I?&#8230;) upstairs. Just know that the lucky recipient will, the next time you see them, give you an amused (or bemused) look, and say something like &#8220;Um, yeah, thanks for the book and all,&#8221; while backing slowly towards the door.</p>
<p>If this kind of arcane, ill-constructed, mush-mouthed tripe is what passes for serious Christian writing these days, I&#8217;m quite happy to leave you to it, dickering over the True Nature of the Trinity or the exact temperature of Hell &#8212; instead I&#8217;ll smilingly opt to brush off a copy of Middlemarch or Howards End, or maybe a spot of Vonnegut or Wodehouse, and get a bracing, swooningly beautiful dose of the real meaning of life.</p>
<p>Good day.</p>
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<p></strong>Considering that I felt the Trinty was being more or less portrayed as Moe, Larry and Curly in the book, I really couldn&#8217;t fault this reviewer for comparing the portrayal to a kooky sit-com family.</p>
<p>Talk about remaking God in OUR image. . . well, it&#8217;s not a pretty sight, even for a stooges fan.</p>
<p>Everyone have a good day and a Merry Christmas!</p>
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